Want A “How To Revise Your Novel” Full Scholarship?

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4 responses to “Want A “How To Revise Your Novel” Full Scholarship?”

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   Gracie O’Neil

   September 27, 2009

   Holly, I seriously can’t wait for this course. I need it bigtime. Just signed with an agent and have sent my first set of revisions in (for the 2nd book in a trilogy), but am working on revisions for the 1st book, and writing the 3rd. it’s that “publishable speed” thing I need.

   Wanted to tell you too that I love your teaching style. Thinking Sideways has already helped me clarify so much in my own head. I’ve realized I was slapping a gag on my Muse when I should have been giving her a megaphone!

   Am going to do my darnedest to contribute to the video fun. 🙂

   Thanks a million.
   🙂
   Gracie

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   Don

   September 23, 2009

   Would love to apply but the soonest I will be able to revise my second work will be thanksgiving (Hopefully). The one I’m working on now has been a bear. What I want to do finish a work then revise the one before.
   I have been taught you should let a work sit at least a year before revising. I ‘m not sure how common that is, but it’s from a couple workshops, and from people who helped me with my first novel.
   Also I want to finish this one before revising anything. I’ll keep abreast of developments

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      Holly

      September 25, 2009

      Considering I’m not going to be awarding the scholarships until January 19th, you’ll have plenty of time if you want to play. 😀

      As for letting work sit for a year—I’d have frickin’ starved to death if I did that. Frequently, I had only a week to let a book sit.

      It’s entirely possible to learn to be objective at publishable speed—which is part of what I’ll be teaching in the course.

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   Mark

   September 23, 2009

   Read “The 101 Worst Things That Go Wrong in the First Draft” before I started writing. I am incredibly guilty of the Infodump, and several others, but what was a real kick in the pants was “Writing scenes that don’t matter”.

   I’m writing the second book of a trilogy (God, such a cliché), so many of the scenes I’ve been thinking about since I started the first book, and somewhere along the line I forgot if they were important or not. I fell so in love with all these character moments, that I kept every single one of them in a massive glut of a chapter.

   It surprised me that I’d let myself do it too, because I’ve always strictly followed the rule “Every scene should be doing at least two things”, otherwise I know even before I write it that the scene isn’t working.

   I am particularly interested in what you write about promises, because I feel like many books I read make inadvertent promises that are never acknowledged, let alone fulfilled. It’s of particular interest to me, because a series really needs a strong ending, otherwise the whole journey becomes a bit of an insult to the reader. The author owes the reader after three books.

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