Wallpaper, Blinkies and Shinbangers: World Clinic moves forward #WABWM

By Holly Lisle

Today in the Create A World Clinic, I started into one of my favorite parts of worldbuilding: developing active description.

Got 1044 words so far on how active description is different than the passive description that pushes readers to skim, and introduced the three critical elements of active description: Wallpaper, Blinkies, and Shinbangers.

It was a fun writing day. Looking forward to putting together the worksheets for this section tomorrow, and finishing up my demo.

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