Thorsday Night: Final, With Caveats

It grew. Damn thing is now 8200 words.

It’s a helluva lot better, and it’s tight.

But 8200 words.

I’m looking over everything for stuff to cut.

I have missed my bed deadline by a lot. I will not, however, miss my turn-in deadline. So…onward.

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About the author: Novelist, writing teacher, on a mission to reprint my out-of-print books and indie-publish my new ones.

2 comments… add one
  • Texanne Jun 1, 2009 @ 8:06

    This is wonderful–to have your example as well as your knowledge before us. Excellent!

  • Elizabeth J. Baldwin Jun 1, 2009 @ 7:58

    Ouch. Somehow it is always easier to add words than to remove them.

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