It grew. Damn thing is now 8200 words.
It’s a helluva lot better, and it’s tight.
But 8200 words.
I’m looking over everything for stuff to cut.
I have missed my bed deadline by a lot. I will not, however, miss my turn-in deadline. So…onward.
Thorsday Night: Final, With Caveats
This is wonderful–to have your example as well as your knowledge before us. Excellent!
Ouch. Somehow it is always easier to add words than to remove them.