This last proposal passed muster
The letter from Russ reads,
This version of Talyn is the final version. I see a few tiny things I’d like tucked in, but there will be no further changes to the overall structure and plot. This time you’ve hit a home run. It’s really amazing how huge an improvement this over all past versions. What an amazing, productive process this has been! How far you’ve come since the first version!
I’ll send a few comments shortly, but they really are going to be minor questions of consistency and information and will not in any way go to the substance of the story.
And there was much rejoicing.
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