The visiting old god …

By Holly Lisle

… is turning out to be a loathesome bastard, but his attitude is doing a nice job of highlighting what Molly is up against, both around her and inside of her. And he’s done a good job of bringing the evils of the dark gods clearly to light.

1082 words done at this point. Had to dice some out, so I’ve done more — but I like my keepers.

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