Got my 2000 words plus a smidge — and I love the scene. I got some good disaster and excellent despair, and a pretty nifty splatter, too. Have to go back in and dig for poignancy in the re-write, though. I came off a little thin there.
Also did the Fantasy Troubleshooting class this morning — got two great problems. Making a demon a compelling, deep, rich character, and writing about different peoples through their own eyes. I love good problems.
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