Sharpening and defining

By Holly Lisle

Yesterday’s work didn’t go well. The sex scene as written was extraneous, and as always when I take off in the wrong direction, I stalled out.

So today I’m going back in, making the sex fit, doing more development on the characters, and tying in more of the rest of the story to that scene.

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