Ohio 4, Chapter 2 — and my MC has reason to question the path her life has taken 1309 words, 4254 total

By Holly Lisle

I’ll take it.

The scene started like an ancient Ford on a cold day, and I had to beat several characters with sticks to get them up and moving… and I am voting this “The Chapter Most Likely to Need Heavy Revision” when all five books are in their pile.

But I got some good action, and some good worldbuilding (without being too heavy on catching up to speed those readers who pick up this book first).

And my main character is having a particularly rocky night, after already having had a painfully disturbing day.

So… good fun for me. <evil grin>


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