Made huge progress on the HAWKSPAR line-for-scene; it turned out to be an almost total rethink of the book and the roles played by the two main characters. Also got a fair amount of that rethinking down on paper.
Time to wrap it up, though; yesterday’s migraine never completely went away, and now it’s edging back. If I go lie down for a bit, I may be able to fend it off, instead of spending an entire second day lying down in darkness.
