Got a call from Robin; before we send out the proposal it needs a bit more fine-tuning. This time the overall looks okay. But points of rework:
* The dog — possible psychic connection between female lead and his appearance.
* The dump site. Consider rethink of what we find there.
* I don’t even have words yet for what came to mind as we discussed this, but "summoning" should act as a trigger when I get back to this tomorrow.
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