My hero, stuck in his police station with a map and push-pins (he likes low-tech), is finding evidence that the monsters he hunts have been active in his area far longer than he suspected. He has no idea yet where they are … that’ll have to wait until my MC brings them down on her head with an unfortunate acceptance of a teaching opportunity still a bit down the road from now.
I’m writing thin—getting the broad strokes of the story down, but leaving the scenes themselves sparse and lacking in telling detail. I can always feel that when I do it—I’m just not bothering to go back in and do the detail work yet. Details are nice revision additions.
How are your words coming along?