Tonight’s addition to the scene I’m digging through worked well for me. My hero has come face to face with the reality that the horror he left behind, far in his past, has once again caught up with him. And to deal with it, he can’t have the comfortable life he’s created for himself.
While I’ll build on this in later scenes, I’m happy with the way this first approach to the dilemma turned out.
“What the mind forgets,” was the recurring mini-theme of the scene. It provided a nice point-counterpoint to the situation.
I still feel like roadkill on the grill, but I figure at least I got words.
(And thanks for the good wishes. I’m at least feeling better enough to write. I’ll take that.)
How are you coming with your words?