- To manuscript page 228 on the type-in
- 74 pages of revision progress on Ohio 2
- OHIO 2 REVISION: Made it to manuscript page 134 of the Ohio 2 type-in.
- Some days go more smoothly than others. Ohio Two Revision
- So today I start the type-in of the Ohio 2 Revision
- Today I hit a messy part of the manuscript…
- Character Paranoia, and the State of Revision
- Made it to page 188 on the write-in revision of Book 2
- Revelation Struck!!!
- I’m annoyed with myself — Ohio 2 revision read-through, markup… and an unanticipated issue
