These scenes worked up fast. I think I’m going to need to go back in and put in more detail in the revision, but I like the characters that developed. Brig Hafferty, I knew, of course — he was the good detective in Midnight Rain. Dia, short for Diana, is coming together for me pretty well, as is her sometimes-partner Ryan Williams. Stan Chang as Brig’s partner made me laugh — I didn’t even know who he was going to be, and then there he was — Army brat, smartass, observant and a bit up-tight.
So on to Hawkspar, where I’m going to be facing an orange and a yellow scene for starters.