Comments on: The NEW TalysMana Artifact (and Upcoming Contest)

By: The Pencil Neck

The Pencil Neck — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 06:45:12 +0000

383 words.

The Princess is loaded onto a ship with two other prisoners to take her back to her home planet to face judge and jury.

By: Meghan

Meghan — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 17:24:02 +0000

I am really liking Will Grey. I’m so glad you pursued the question of what would happen if Kettan didn’t shoo him out of her apartment.

By: Dean H

Dean H — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 15:55:53 +0000

302 on Friday 4206 for the week.

I’m on gardening leave for the next three weeks so i’m hoping to get to my 90K by the end of the month with a big ‘HOPING’. I’ve said it now! That’s my target 29K this month?

Hope you all have a good week.

Dean H (UK)

By: The Pencil Neck

The Pencil Neck — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 07:12:44 +0000

568 words.

The captain of a ship taking prisoners back to the Capital is happy to welcome an escort ship (even though it’s an Imperial Corvette). She thought she was making this trip solo. But then this Corvette orders her to hand over one of her prisoners. And then refuses to let her contact Command. And after she hits battle stations, the missiles start flying.

I worked a lot on revision today and because of that, I didn’t spend as much time on this as I would have liked.

By: The Pencil Neck

The Pencil Neck — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 07:03:15 +0000

Actually, since I’ve thought about this some more. I keep the scene but change one of the players.

By: Larkk

Larkk — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 15:27:46 +0000

I set out to write a sentence of 30 words for revision and ended up with 2554 really sloppy words, exploring an entirely new dimension to the antagonist(s) in my revision.
Because the really sloppy words are what lead me to answers

By: Gabby

Gabby — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 13:12:29 +0000

0 words yesterday, just a complete vege day. So now I plan to turn off the internet and focus. Hopefully I’ll be back with a word count later today.

By: Gabby

Gabby — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 13:07:49 +0000

Wow, what a great development (sounds like a great Muse bomb).

By: Greg

Greg — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 08:19:47 +0000

Friday’s words:
KavI: 645, hopefully finished on Monday
D&DII: 868
RFW: 1240
Two thousand more words chipped off OFL revision, too.

By: The Pencil Neck

The Pencil Neck — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 07:46:00 +0000

And now that I think about it, I think I’m going to end up tossing this whole scene. It wasn’t planned and now that I think about it, it’s got nothing going for it. I think it’s going to be better if I stick to my outline on this.