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	<title>Comments on: The Line-For-Scene Is Done</title>
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	<description>read with hunger, write with joy, live with passion</description>
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		<title>By: Noise in the Attic - Broken toys, outdated clothes, dust, and cobwebs. Things scrabble in the corner. Watch your step. &#187; The Downward Spiral</title>
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		<dc:creator>Noise in the Attic - Broken toys, outdated clothes, dust, and cobwebs. Things scrabble in the corner. Watch your step. &#187; The Downward Spiral</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Nov 2007 14:36:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] about how to handle the rewrite, and I&#8217;ve decided to use a variation on Holly&#8217;s Line-ForScene technique. The variation is: for the first revision pass, I will use different colored index cards [...] </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] about how to handle the rewrite, and I&#8217;ve decided to use a variation on Holly&#8217;s Line-ForScene technique. The variation is: for the first revision pass, I will use different colored index cards [...] </p>
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		<title>By: "Miracles" Line for Scene finished &#183; All the Billion Other Moments</title>
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		<dc:creator>"Miracles" Line for Scene finished &#183; All the Billion Other Moments</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 May 2007 02:51:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] technique is covered in Holly Lisleâ€™s Create A Plot Clinic, it&#8217;s also covered briefly on  Holly&#8217;s writing diary. I finished up this morning with 109 cards (16 green, 36 yellow, 31 orange, and 26 [...] </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] technique is covered in Holly Lisleâ€™s Create A Plot Clinic, it&#8217;s also covered briefly on  Holly&#8217;s writing diary. I finished up this morning with 109 cards (16 green, 36 yellow, 31 orange, and 26 [...] </p>
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		<title>By: arainsb123</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Sep 2005 03:48:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ack. The permalink URL for my trackback was stripped of all the &quot;%20&quot;s that represent spaces.

&lt;i&gt;Ascwellan&lt;/i&gt; is going to need a ton of rewriting and revising, too, because of the scenes I wrote out of order. They&#039;ve caused a lot of inconsistencies.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ack. The permalink URL for my trackback was stripped of all the &#8220;%20&#8243;s that represent spaces.</p>
<p><i>Ascwellan</i> is going to need a ton of rewriting and revising, too, because of the scenes I wrote out of order. They&#8217;ve caused a lot of inconsistencies.</p>
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		<title>By: Rantings of a Self-Published Writer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rantings of a Self-Published Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Sep 2005 03:45:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;57,181&lt;/strong&gt;

That puts me at 3,300 words written today (I cut a 400 word pointless scene). The number of inconsistencies and necessary revisions for this book are really getting me down; they&#039;re unavoidable for the three scenes I wrote out of order, and a few ear...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>57,181</strong></p>
<p>That puts me at 3,300 words written today (I cut a 400 word pointless scene). The number of inconsistencies and necessary revisions for this book are really getting me down; they&#8217;re unavoidable for the three scenes I wrote out of order, and a few ear&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: PolarBear</title>
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		<dc:creator>PolarBear</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Sep 2005 22:48:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fanned out like that, I see way more green than you made it sound like.  Of course, each of those pink and yellows indicates a slew more work than those greens, so if I had to do the work, it would look more daunting to me, too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fanned out like that, I see way more green than you made it sound like.  Of course, each of those pink and yellows indicates a slew more work than those greens, so if I had to do the work, it would look more daunting to me, too.</p>
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		<title>By: Jim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Sep 2005 20:56:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Holly,

You&#039;re off to a good start, it seems, even the work seems overwhelming at the moment.

Query:  while I know that a lot of people work better with index cards, I&#039;ve put together a data base where I keep my scene summaries.  Is that something you might be interested in?

Jim</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Holly,</p>
<p>You&#8217;re off to a good start, it seems, even the work seems overwhelming at the moment.</p>
<p>Query:  while I know that a lot of people work better with index cards, I&#8217;ve put together a data base where I keep my scene summaries.  Is that something you might be interested in?</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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		<title>By: ammit</title>
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		<dc:creator>ammit</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Sep 2005 20:06:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>From reading those three cards (and the preview bit you posted a while back), I&#039;m even more eager to read this book.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>From reading those three cards (and the preview bit you posted a while back), I&#8217;m even more eager to read this book.</p>
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