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	<description>read with hunger, write with joy, live with passion</description>
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		<title>By: Dean H</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16900</link>
		<dc:creator>Dean H</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2009 14:03:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Guys, thanks for the advice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Guys, thanks for the advice.</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Lisle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16899</link>
		<dc:creator>Holly Lisle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 03:18:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats on the halfway point!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats on the halfway point!</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Lisle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16898</link>
		<dc:creator>Holly Lisle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 03:17:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What Pencil Neck said.  That&#039;s a good, salable length.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What Pencil Neck said.  That&#8217;s a good, salable length.</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Lisle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16897</link>
		<dc:creator>Holly Lisle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 03:17:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stephanie, it depends on when you signed up.  The scenes mail out on Mondays and Thursdays.  If you&#039;ve just joined and you have scenes 1 and 2, hang in.  More will be coming.

If you have gaps, each scene is numbered.

I&#039;ve posted 6, and wrote the first bit of 7 tonight.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stephanie, it depends on when you signed up.  The scenes mail out on Mondays and Thursdays.  If you&#8217;ve just joined and you have scenes 1 and 2, hang in.  More will be coming.</p>
<p>If you have gaps, each scene is numbered.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve posted 6, and wrote the first bit of 7 tonight.</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Lisle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16896</link>
		<dc:creator>Holly Lisle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 03:15:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Tamara,

Welcome to our little romp.  You got an excellent starting wordcount.  Just remember that there will be days when the numbers drop---and any step forward, no matter how small, is still forward.  Hang in.

And I&#039;m glad you joined us.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Tamara,</p>
<p>Welcome to our little romp.  You got an excellent starting wordcount.  Just remember that there will be days when the numbers drop&#8212;and any step forward, no matter how small, is still forward.  Hang in.</p>
<p>And I&#8217;m glad you joined us.</p>
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		<title>By: Cayleigh</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16895</link>
		<dc:creator>Cayleigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 23:18:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>500 words Friday, 1200 Saturday, and another 700 today.

I forgot to study for tomorrow&#039;s test, so instead of writing more I have to have a cram session, but I broke 50,000 so I&#039;m not too mad about it. Halfway there!

This is probably the first point in writing this novel that I think I might actually have something good, something that people might want to read. That at least part of it makes sense, and the parts that don&#039;t aren&#039;t so huge as to be unfixable. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>500 words Friday, 1200 Saturday, and another 700 today.</p>
<p>I forgot to study for tomorrow&#8217;s test, so instead of writing more I have to have a cram session, but I broke 50,000 so I&#8217;m not too mad about it. Halfway there!</p>
<p>This is probably the first point in writing this novel that I think I might actually have something good, something that people might want to read. That at least part of it makes sense, and the parts that don&#8217;t aren&#8217;t so huge as to be unfixable. <img src='http://hollylisle.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: The Pencil Neck</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16894</link>
		<dc:creator>The Pencil Neck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:15:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s probably best to wait until the whole thing is done before going back and rewriting/revising/fixing things.  Make notes to yourself about how you&#039;d like it to have been, but in general, don&#039;t actually go back and fix it.

The length of a novel varies on the genre.  If your genre is sci-fi/fantasy then 90k is jperfect.  You want to hit in the 75k to 100k range.  That genre averages about 250 words per page.  So 90k comes to a 360 page novel and that&#039;s a good size.  Other genres have different page/length requirements.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s probably best to wait until the whole thing is done before going back and rewriting/revising/fixing things.  Make notes to yourself about how you&#8217;d like it to have been, but in general, don&#8217;t actually go back and fix it.</p>
<p>The length of a novel varies on the genre.  If your genre is sci-fi/fantasy then 90k is jperfect.  You want to hit in the 75k to 100k range.  That genre averages about 250 words per page.  So 90k comes to a 360 page novel and that&#8217;s a good size.  Other genres have different page/length requirements.</p>
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		<title>By: Dean H</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16893</link>
		<dc:creator>Dean H</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 20:00:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>921 Friday 6627 for the week, had a constructive week on the writing front my wife read what i&#039;d done so far on this first attempt and pointed out that my writing style had changed since chapter 1 to which she was quite right when I revisited.  Next she pointed out that Chapter 6 &#039;The Semiotic Networks&#039; needs more detail I know whats happening but the reader needs to understand also?  Hmmmm I think she&#039;s right!  So i&#039;ve re-done chapter 1 and will be looking to explain chapter 6 in a little more detail.

I have got a question i&#039;m on 27k at the moment and probably nearly a third of my way through so that would put me on about 90k at the end?  Is that about right for a book????</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>921 Friday 6627 for the week, had a constructive week on the writing front my wife read what i&#8217;d done so far on this first attempt and pointed out that my writing style had changed since chapter 1 to which she was quite right when I revisited.  Next she pointed out that Chapter 6 &#8216;The Semiotic Networks&#8217; needs more detail I know whats happening but the reader needs to understand also?  Hmmmm I think she&#8217;s right!  So i&#8217;ve re-done chapter 1 and will be looking to explain chapter 6 in a little more detail.</p>
<p>I have got a question i&#8217;m on 27k at the moment and probably nearly a third of my way through so that would put me on about 90k at the end?  Is that about right for a book????</p>
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		<title>By: Greg</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16892</link>
		<dc:creator>Greg</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 18:43:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Friday&#039;s words (11th)
KavI: 506
OFL: 1168
RFW: 1061
Will be adding a word target of 650 for D&amp;DII to my daily goals as of tomorrow (Monday).  OFL will hopefully come to an end mid-January, and I&#039;ll not be starting any new ones until I&#039;ve got these finished, hopefully meeting my April target.  Then May might bring a need for paid employment, which will naturally reduce my word counts considerably...!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Friday&#8217;s words (11th)<br />
KavI: 506<br />
OFL: 1168<br />
RFW: 1061<br />
Will be adding a word target of 650 for D&amp;DII to my daily goals as of tomorrow (Monday).  OFL will hopefully come to an end mid-January, and I&#8217;ll not be starting any new ones until I&#8217;ve got these finished, hopefully meeting my April target.  Then May might bring a need for paid employment, which will naturally reduce my word counts considerably&#8230;!</p>
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		<title>By: Cayleigh</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/posted-the-next-talysmana-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-16891</link>
		<dc:creator>Cayleigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 16:25:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know how you feel. Writing is the best way I&#039;ve found to drown out my History teachers rants about her cats.

Welcome!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know how you feel. Writing is the best way I&#8217;ve found to drown out my History teachers rants about her cats.</p>
<p>Welcome!</p>
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