Comments on: Novel Snippet: Headless Dude In The Morning (from DTD)

By: daniel

daniel — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 08:43:49 +0000

watch tenses: – 1st para> ‘didnt’ — should be ‘wouldnt’… otherwise: it got me hooked…

Sam — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 17:30:31 +0000

Sounds really good to me.

Vanessa Wells — Thu, 06 Aug 2009 21:23:56 +0000

um….when did you say it was going to hit book stores?….I NEED this book.

megan — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 00:10:49 +0000

yep

JWRR — Sun, 14 Jun 2009 16:12:09 +0000

This just totally inspired me to get back to writing my wip; Thanks a lot. DW I’m not planning on using your ideas. Thanks a bunch.

Sherri — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 16:11:20 +0000

Hook…Line…and Sinker…

I want it!

Ed — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 04:45:47 +0000

Doppelgangers of time?

Elizabeth Barrette — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 02:14:39 +0000

This looks like a novel I would enjoy reading. Violations of biological laws usually get my attention! Thank you for sharing.

Victoria — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 23:19:02 +0000

There are no words to describe how this snippet made me feel. Your writing is so beautiful Holly! And creepy.

Glynis Smy — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 17:42:32 +0000

whoops …descriptive