Comments on: Friday Snippets: From the Ghost Files

By: Katherine

Katherine — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 06:42:14 +0000

I’m with Gabriele. IIRC, the Garden of Eden comes with an angel. With a flaming sword. Wonder what he looks like in this incarnation…

Gabriele — Sat, 20 Oct 2007 03:34:58 +0000

I feel a bit uneasy about that Garden of Eden.

After all, it’s Holly’s creation. *grin*

Nice snippet. And nice twist – after that ominous shadow last week I had expected something darker.

joelysue — Sat, 20 Oct 2007 03:05:37 +0000

Oh, wow, what a scene! From fear to wonder.

Joy Renee — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 22:01:47 +0000

this captures what seems to me to be the essence of art–both making it and seeking it out–sudden beauty that brings tears to your eyes.

as a reader, i’m captured by this scene.

cherylp — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 19:05:24 +0000

A publisher turned this down? More fool, they.

TimK — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 19:04:29 +0000

Hi, Holly. Looking forward to the next snippet.

-TimK

IanT — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 18:14:15 +0000

Another great start; maybe my last week’s comment about corners and edges wasn’t too far off the mark!

Jess — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 18:02:39 +0000

Wow. That was NOT what I was expecting! I like Natalie’s character.