Comments on: Friday Snippet: from THE RUBY KEY http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/ read with hunger, write with joy, live with passion Wed, 08 Feb 2012 23:43:55 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: seanachi http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6658 seanachi Fri, 17 Aug 2007 11:45:52 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6658 “If anything in there didn’t know we were coming, it knows now,” I whispered. Now that's just darn foreboding. “If anything in there didn’t know we were coming, it knows now,” I whispered.

Now that’s just darn foreboding.

]]> By: Nicole http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6657 Nicole Mon, 13 Aug 2007 15:29:30 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6657 I agree with Genna - I'm okay with spiders as long as I can see them, too. But I am fully convinced that, given the option, they would rather play in my hair than stay nice and safe in their webs. I agree with Genna – I’m okay with spiders as long as I can see them, too. But I am fully convinced that, given the option, they would rather play in my hair than stay nice and safe in their webs.

]]> By: Bri http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6656 Bri Sat, 11 Aug 2007 06:09:42 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6656 That was great - very realistic and creepy and..bleh! Spiders and guano and narrow places - all in one snippet! Very nice :D That was great – very realistic and creepy and..bleh! Spiders and guano and narrow places – all in one snippet! Very nice :D

]]> By: joelysue http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6655 joelysue Sat, 11 Aug 2007 02:04:49 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6655 Oh, man, what a killer. Just the thought of spiders and bats in my hair freaks me out! Oh, man, what a killer. Just the thought of spiders and bats in my hair freaks me out!

]]> By: cherylp http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6654 cherylp Sat, 11 Aug 2007 00:05:27 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6654 Yeesh. I hate spiders. I know just how Genna feels--nasty, creepy things dropping on your head, crawling in your hair....crap. Now I'll be on the lookout for the evil little things all night. Yeesh. I hate spiders. I know just how Genna feels–nasty, creepy things dropping on your head, crawling in your hair….crap. Now I’ll be on the lookout for the evil little things all night.

]]> By: PolarBear http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6653 PolarBear Fri, 10 Aug 2007 22:30:10 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6653 Nope. No bats here. ... Just snakes. Nope. No bats here. … Just snakes.

]]> By: PJ http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6652 PJ Fri, 10 Aug 2007 20:49:10 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6652 Wow. What a heart-stopping moment. After my MRI yesterday (closed), I wouldn't want to be wedged in some place I couldn't escape from easily. Creepy. Hope nothing too nasty comes for them. :-D Wow. What a heart-stopping moment. After my MRI yesterday (closed), I wouldn’t want to be wedged in some place I couldn’t escape from easily. Creepy. Hope nothing too nasty comes for them. :-D

]]> By: Ann http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6651 Ann Fri, 10 Aug 2007 20:14:54 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6651 That's one big cave they're coming to. Great snippet, nice and creepy. That’s one big cave they’re coming to. Great snippet, nice and creepy.

]]> By: Jess http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6650 Jess Fri, 10 Aug 2007 19:43:49 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6650 I love your descriptions of the echoes! And that's one cave I wouldn't want to be in either. *shudders with Joy Renee* ewww. I love your descriptions of the echoes! And that’s one cave I wouldn’t want to be in either. *shudders with Joy Renee* ewww.

]]> By: IanT http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/comment-page-1/#comment-6649 IanT Fri, 10 Aug 2007 17:15:07 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/08/10/friday-snippet-from-the-ruby-key-4/#comment-6649 <i>My angry whisper scuttled forward to add its rustling-paper sounds to the diminishing chorus of shouts.</i> Good line. :-) My angry whisper scuttled forward to add its rustling-paper sounds to the diminishing chorus of shouts.

Good line. :-)

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