Comments on: Friday Snippet: From MOONROADS http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/ read with hunger, write with joy, live with passion Wed, 08 Feb 2012 23:43:55 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: e.jimshannon http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6800 e.jimshannon Fri, 14 Sep 2007 08:25:06 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6800 My first Friday snippets. Hope I'm doing this right My first Friday snippets. Hope I’m doing this right

]]> By: Bri http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6799 Bri Tue, 11 Sep 2007 04:45:22 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6799 What a way to end! I also loved the way she imagines the worst about the drool and the dark - that it could be a creature perched above them. Seems like something completely believable. :D What a way to end! I also loved the way she imagines the worst about the drool and the dark – that it could be a creature perched above them. Seems like something completely believable. :D

]]> By: IanT http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6798 IanT Sun, 09 Sep 2007 16:09:43 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6798 Excellent ending. :-) Quick typo/misedit: 'A gift Yarri' Excellent ending. :-)

Quick typo/misedit: ‘A gift Yarri’

]]> By: TimK http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6797 TimK Sat, 08 Sep 2007 19:02:07 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6797 Hi, Holly. Again, I love your writing. Only 2 comments: 1. "I gave her the look we reserve for people who ask stupid questions." Ha! I love that line. 2. "I am no comfort to myself." I felt like this could be drawn out a little, so that we could see the internal struggle through which Genna decides to turn on the light. For example, is it based on logic? Or just a gut feeling? &c. All the while, I'd be on the edge of my seat, reading about it. -TimK Hi, Holly. Again, I love your writing. Only 2 comments:

1. “I gave her the look we reserve for people who ask stupid questions.” Ha! I love that line.

2. “I am no comfort to myself.” I felt like this could be drawn out a little, so that we could see the internal struggle through which Genna decides to turn on the light. For example, is it based on logic? Or just a gut feeling? &c. All the while, I’d be on the edge of my seat, reading about it.

-TimK

]]> By: Gabriele http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6796 Gabriele Sat, 08 Sep 2007 14:03:07 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6796 From Hades to Hell, or what? *grin* I love the description, Genna's musings, and that evil little cliffhanger. From Hades to Hell, or what? *grin*

I love the description, Genna’s musings, and that evil little cliffhanger.

]]> By: Joy Renee http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6795 Joy Renee Sat, 08 Sep 2007 02:23:02 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6795 i loved when she tripped over her own thought and then admitted she was 'never much of a comfort to herself'. that captures just the way it is to be confronted by the unknown--our own thoughts often being more fearsome than the actual threat. But not always and thus can never be dismissed. i loved when she tripped over her own thought and then admitted she was ‘never much of a comfort to herself’. that captures just the way it is to be confronted by the unknown–our own thoughts often being more fearsome than the actual threat. But not always and thus can never be dismissed.

]]> By: cherylp http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6794 cherylp Sat, 08 Sep 2007 01:26:06 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6794 Oh, man,you're just going to leave it at that, aren't you! *stalks off muttering* :) Oh, man,you’re just going to leave it at that, aren’t you! *stalks off muttering* :)

]]> By: PolarBear http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6793 PolarBear Sat, 08 Sep 2007 01:01:49 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6793 Behind us, a growling voice said, “I suspect it was because they have the sense to be afraid of me.” I don't imagine I was supposed to LOL at this phrase, was I? I loved it. Behind us, a growling voice said, “I suspect it was because they have the sense to be afraid of me.”

I don’t imagine I was supposed to LOL at this phrase, was I? I loved it.

]]> By: Ann http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6792 Ann Sat, 08 Sep 2007 00:42:43 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6792 I loved the cliffhanger (Aaaah!). That was too cool. Have a great weekend. I loved the cliffhanger (Aaaah!). That was too cool. Have a great weekend.

]]> By: joelysue http://hollylisle.com/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/comment-page-1/#comment-6791 joelysue Fri, 07 Sep 2007 23:37:39 +0000 http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2007/09/07/friday-snippet-from-moonroads/#comment-6791 <i>I am no comfort to myself.</i> Boy, ain't that the truth for us all! Great snippet and cliffhanger. I am no comfort to myself. Boy, ain’t that the truth for us all! Great snippet and cliffhanger.

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