Comments on: DTD—504 words and a rock band

By: Sari

Sari — Wed, 08 Jul 2009 08:17:11 +0000

Depends what kind of a woman Magda is? How shallow is Hudo?

By: Tori

Tori — Wed, 08 Jul 2009 00:15:30 +0000

Thanks again everyone for your thoughts and prayers! I am finally back at home. Now I am just waiting to see if I still have a job.

By: Dee

Dee — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 16:30:23 +0000

Well, she IS a Paladin, so I would think she was trained for the fighting, even if she is a bit young — and female.

I have stories like that; haven’t looked at them in a long, long time, don’t really remember much about them. Unfortunately, most of them are in storage and I can’t get to them, either. One day …

By: Pam

Pam — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:34:57 +0000

Sorry, hadn’t looked at this in two years. A trusted reader is going to review and make sure that is the central question, or if it’s a red herring. Trick is, the abbot is the one who sent her to the front in the first place. A monastery is no place for a young girl, anyway, right? And she was so big, and seemed strong! Heh. Wasn’t it Meatloaf who sang: It’s all coming back to me now. And so it shall.

By: Dee

Dee — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:03:34 +0000

I want to know why they’re sharing the dream! And what’s the dream about? Are the two related somehow? Dang it, throw me a bone here!

By: Sylvia

Sylvia — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:03:03 +0000

Tori, I do hope and pray you and husband get home by end of weekend. And that this misfortune gives you lots of ideas for your writing. Essays on how to cope with such at the very least. Hugs.

Getting at least 250 words, usually more per day. About 400 tonight, didn’t think I was going to get into it, but once started it flowed. Up to a few words below 3000 on short story, Alabama Dreamin. Trying for Sentence Light, Protag & Antag needs, Setting, and Twist for each scene. I think it’s working.

By: Dee

Dee — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:02:03 +0000

Tori, I will DEFINITELY keep you in my thoughts! Maybe this is an opening for something wonderful to happen; I will hope so, anyway!

370 words today. Would have done more, but the kitchen fire this morning kind of threw the day into disarray.

I’m getting worried about my MC; she’s being attacked by a creature wtih no eyes that is somehow controlling a black sludge, and she’s wondering about the mechanics of the whole thing!

By: Pam

Pam — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 02:59:19 +0000

A wily and aged abbot on the homefront. A 17 year old female paladin clearly suffering PTSD. Why do they share the same recurring dream? Not sure that’s an interesting enough question to write more than the 8500 words I’ve got. But it’s a start. Added probably 20 words, and deleted *all* the double spaces between sentences on the old thing tonight. It’s going to be interesting. Thanks for the kick.

By: Don

Don — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 02:42:01 +0000

Well everybody is back on Earth along with a Guardian Transporter that got caught in the field as the team escaped along with two very confused and scared Banold. Went from 5715 to 6628 913 words, not sure about tomorrow, having a family do at my sisters if can get in any writing I’ll be happy. Hope everybody has a safe and happy 4th.

By: Ann

Ann — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 01:51:16 +0000

Slightly over the 250 again for 7/2 – hopefully more tonight, definitely more tomorrow. Happy 4th to all!