Comments on: Beta Version Of Page-Turning Scenes Is Done

By: KalevTait

KalevTait — Mon, 05 May 2008 13:28:13 +0000

In your example, I don’t understand which is the topic unrelated to what they are doing which they start talking about, and which is the topic that you actually want to adress in the scene. Unless I’ve missunderstood the excercise.

By: hollylisle

hollylisle — Thu, 01 May 2008 00:01:18 +0000

I completely forgot Transitions, and am adding that part. And I’m adding the Pacing exercises. So, yes, definitely more.

By: stazie

stazie — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 19:50:51 +0000

Not sure this is where I’m supposed to put this. I liked the Beta Version. The exercises were great. But, despite the evergrowing page count, this version didn’t seem complete. I don’t remember seeing the talking-head discussion you give here. Early on in the Beta you mentioned you would be discussing scene transitions and providing exercises. I didn’t see those. So great stuff, is there more?

By: vanity

vanity — Sat, 26 Apr 2008 13:17:38 +0000

Despite being throw away dialogue to illustrate a point, this is pretty good. This course may yet be the first e-book I buy.