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	<description>read with hunger, write with joy, live with passion</description>
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		<title>By: HannaBelle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17423</link>
		<dc:creator>HannaBelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 18:34:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Probably 200 words of planning, charting, dot and lining.  

Again, my muse is having too much fun with wild ideas. 

I want to really give planning the time to come together, but I am also chomping at the bit to say something.  I plan to just start some pages for each character, see what they have to say.  They might not make it into the final book, but I really want words, words, words again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Probably 200 words of planning, charting, dot and lining.  </p>
<p>Again, my muse is having too much fun with wild ideas. </p>
<p>I want to really give planning the time to come together, but I am also chomping at the bit to say something.  I plan to just start some pages for each character, see what they have to say.  They might not make it into the final book, but I really want words, words, words again.</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Lisle</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17422</link>
		<dc:creator>Holly Lisle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 16:58:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Go, DEB!  Congrats!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Go, DEB!  Congrats!</p>
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		<title>By: DasteRoad</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17421</link>
		<dc:creator>DasteRoad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 14:38:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Didn&#039;t write on the latest 2 days, I needed time to focus and plot the next few scenes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Didn&#8217;t write on the latest 2 days, I needed time to focus and plot the next few scenes.</p>
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		<title>By: Danzier</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17420</link>
		<dc:creator>Danzier</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 14:17:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Way to go Holly and Deb! Pencil Neck, good luck with the deadline issues. (knock on wood--&quot;scratch a stay, turn three times,&quot; etc...)

27 words, but they fix a moderate problem, allowing me to write the second half of the scene without making my audience hate the MC for what he does--and doesn&#039;t--do to the slave trader. I&#039;m at the hinge in the scene.

Got a little sidetracked by school. The first main topic of a class has been one of my main but subtle themes, and I realized that I wasn&#039;t sure I wanted to endorse the idea in fiction the way it was presented in class, so I&#039;m doing a little more research on it. If anyone knows a good book or website on how personal choice and culture influence personal development--and by &quot;good&quot; I mean sort of professional but ok for beginners--please let me know. My teacher hasn&#039;t been much help on this part. schroe29@uwosh.edu  :D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Way to go Holly and Deb! Pencil Neck, good luck with the deadline issues. (knock on wood&#8211;&#8221;scratch a stay, turn three times,&#8221; etc&#8230;)</p>
<p>27 words, but they fix a moderate problem, allowing me to write the second half of the scene without making my audience hate the MC for what he does&#8211;and doesn&#8217;t&#8211;do to the slave trader. I&#8217;m at the hinge in the scene.</p>
<p>Got a little sidetracked by school. The first main topic of a class has been one of my main but subtle themes, and I realized that I wasn&#8217;t sure I wanted to endorse the idea in fiction the way it was presented in class, so I&#8217;m doing a little more research on it. If anyone knows a good book or website on how personal choice and culture influence personal development&#8211;and by &#8220;good&#8221; I mean sort of professional but ok for beginners&#8211;please let me know. My teacher hasn&#8217;t been much help on this part. <a href="mailto:schroe29@uwosh.edu">schroe29@uwosh.edu</a>  <img src='http://hollylisle.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Greg</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17419</link>
		<dc:creator>Greg</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 08:01:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kav1: 650, and one of my scenes near the end, being mostly action, ended up quite short, so I&#039;ve only got a couple more to go before my second attempt at telling this story is finished (in first draft anyway)
D&amp;DII: 902
RFW: 1260
Another two thousand words through the great OFL word cull, too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kav1: 650, and one of my scenes near the end, being mostly action, ended up quite short, so I&#8217;ve only got a couple more to go before my second attempt at telling this story is finished (in first draft anyway)<br />
D&amp;DII: 902<br />
RFW: 1260<br />
Another two thousand words through the great OFL word cull, too.</p>
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		<title>By: The Pencil Neck</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17418</link>
		<dc:creator>The Pencil Neck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 06:47:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>779 words.

The Princess tells the interrogator that she doesn&#039;t know where her mother is but if they let her go, she&#039;ll track her down and turn her in.  The interrogator has the Princess taken back to her cell.

Then the Princess is out and contacts her ship to get the Dancer&#039;s address.  She goes to the address to talk about the weapons she has on her ship.  A child answers the door.  The Dancer is not happy and doesn&#039;t want to do this in front of her kid.

This whole week has been insane.  I&#039;ve got tight deadlines all over the place and they&#039;re dumping more work on me.  It&#039;s crazy.  There&#039;s no way I can finish everything on time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>779 words.</p>
<p>The Princess tells the interrogator that she doesn&#8217;t know where her mother is but if they let her go, she&#8217;ll track her down and turn her in.  The interrogator has the Princess taken back to her cell.</p>
<p>Then the Princess is out and contacts her ship to get the Dancer&#8217;s address.  She goes to the address to talk about the weapons she has on her ship.  A child answers the door.  The Dancer is not happy and doesn&#8217;t want to do this in front of her kid.</p>
<p>This whole week has been insane.  I&#8217;ve got tight deadlines all over the place and they&#8217;re dumping more work on me.  It&#8217;s crazy.  There&#8217;s no way I can finish everything on time.</p>
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		<title>By: The Pencil Neck</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17417</link>
		<dc:creator>The Pencil Neck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 06:43:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Woot!</description>
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		<title>By: Deb1789</title>
		<link>http://hollylisle.com/4000-words/comment-page-1/#comment-17416</link>
		<dc:creator>Deb1789</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 06:41:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>1157 Words!!!
Do I really need to say more?
The Block is Beaten!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>1157 Words!!!<br />
Do I really need to say more?<br />
The Block is Beaten!!</p>
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